IELTS WRITING TASK 2-good member of society

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Other, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Juvernail delinquency, a controversal and embarrassing problem to both parents and the society, has recently instigated pulblic concern nation wide. Some individuals surely believe that the parents should shoulder the incumbency on raising their child as an scrupulous honest person, yet others hold the view that it in school that such kind of  liability lies in. Personally, I reckon that neither the fromer nor the latter assersion is well founded.

Those parent-oritened advocaters maintan that unconsipicious as it is, parenting plays an perfound role in moulding children’s uprightness. In comparation, schooling is more often symblized as an sancratory for inculating konwledge rather than a place specialized in raising moral awareness. Besides, parents themselves are the children’s initial teachers, and they stay with children during the age of 0 to 6, a critical period when the moral value froms.

On the contrary, the school-foused individuals argue that the single role that a school palys as merely teaching konwledge, from which the modern education, with such versatile function as both knowledge education and moral cultivation, stems, has been rendered obsolete. What's more, it is incredable for a place where children spend 16 or more years from his/her 6 to his/her 22 on education, to escape its resposiblity of fostering upstanding citizens.

As far as I am concerned, cultivating the descendant should neither be a liability for familiy nor a obligation for school, neither of which could be responsible for, hypothetically, the failure in fulfilling their jobs. It shoud be a incumbency for every single individual who has an esctasy of love to his/her country.