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2013-12-31

IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - ADS

To what extend do you agree
Never before in history has the business been more prosperous than now. Commercial, as one of the primary means to achieve this, have a unique impact on individuals, which arguably nothing could approach. Some people highly praise it, even arguing that advertisement is a piece of art, whereas I, similar to other individuals, regard it more as a methodology to induce customers to buy something unnecessary, given its merits.
Not surprisingly, advocates emphasis on the necessity of advertising. They vociferously support that advertisement is indispensable in free market economies, because of its capacity as a source to spur consumers’ demand and to create job opportunities. They also state that consumers need to be informed about the attributes and other alternatives of the product before sealing the deal.
Admittedly, correct as it may be in these assertions, several warning need to be heeded. The potential effect of manipulation serves as a case in point to illustrate advertising’s drawbacks. Most advertisers focus on selling a brand image, which usually invite glamorous or successful people in order to create an impression that consumers would be similar to those people after using a particular product. It is such an illusion that motivates individuals to purchase impulsively, resulting in unnecessary orders.
In addition, when it comes to the impact on children, its advantages pale in comparison with its disadvantages. Considering the fact that young children are more likely to be influenced and the fact that parents nowadays usually palm their children to every wish, advertisers often target their marketing at them, which in turn they put pressure onto their parents. This process seldom involves a rational analysis of necessity.
As a result, government should not shirk their responsibilities. Governors have a duty to verify the content of commercials, and accordingly introduce laws to punish those irregularities, especially in order to protect young people. For instance, unhealthy food should not be marketed in a way that attracts children. Another case in point might be that warnings must be noticeably displayed on cigarette packets.
Consequently, judging from the reams of evidence discussed above, we can safely conclude that despite its contributions made to our life, at least a certain degree of censorship need to be casted on advertising industry.


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