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2014-01-12

IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - criminal put into prison


5.Some people believe that for the criminals who committed heavy crimes should be put into prison as long as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures should be used?


People are brought up to believe the complete culture norm that crime should be punished. Some individuals even argue that those who committed felony should be incarcerated as long as possible. Although this could radically eliminate the possibility for reverting criminals, the majority hardly subscribe to this theory. Other measures such as community service and providing them with constant/spiritual care will be discussed in this essay.

To begin with, community service offers a great opportunity for them to compensate for the society that they own a debt to. Take China for example, numerous jails have adopted this method, motivating culprits to help local enterprises by producing manufactories for free. This example proves how the society could benefit from these criminals instead of incarcerating them. Thus, the advantages of this method triumph over those of life time imprison, which in turn indicates that putting into prison is not the only option available.

Secondly, spending more time caring them in order to explore the reason behind their act might be another choice. For instance, experts suggest that psychological isolation breed crime, and most criminals do have a miserable family relationship. Because of this, we can greatly reduce the chance for reverting crime by offering more care. Therefore, a more humane method to curb criminal rate has been found.


To recapitulate, after analysing the two alternative ways to tackle crime, it can be readily seen that there are other ways available compared to lifelong imprisonment. Consequently, it is predicted that criminal rate will be substantially curbed by more humane and effective options.

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